
"Just read like you're talking to me".
This familiar plea of news directors is well intentioned advice
for all on-air performers. But it's easier said than done. Conversational
reads elude most young anchors and reporters and can hold back
even seasoned pros from truly breakthrough performances. Why
is it so hard to achieve?
You
don't read aloud like you speak. When you read written language
aloud, even language you wrote, you use a small part of your
cerebral cortex over your left ear -- and very little else. It's
just a processor: garbage in, garbage out. Which is why people
sound so weird even when they read aloud stories they're familiar
with. But when you generate language, as in speaking in conversation,
you use many parts of your brain. And that hooks you up to what
really creates conversational delivery: emphases.
More
than other languages, the American language uses emphasis
to give meaning to words. To illustrate this, read this sentence
5 times but emphasize a different word each time:
Barry gave Gary his money.
The
meaning of sentences changes dramatically depending on the
word(s) you emphasize. But the system isn't foolproof. Notice
how the money could be Barry's or Gary's even when you emphasize
HIS. Your brain resolves issues like these with grammar and
construction, as in, Barry gave Gary his money BACK.
Emphases
are most often used to signal newness or contrast with something
that came before. Because spoken language is sequential,
one word after another, one sentence after another, you tend
to emphasize the new thing or the different thing in your sequence
of thoughts. The emphases in these second sentences are driven
by the meaning in the first, in other words, what came before:
BARRY gave Gary his money. But none of Gary's OTHER friends
DID.
Barry GAVE Gary his money. And he didn't even ask for an IOU.
Barry gave GARY his money. Which irritated Barry's OTHER friends
bigtime.
Barry gave Gary HIS money. Now Gary can afford to EAT, or, Gary
is happy to have it BACK.
Barry gave Gary his MONEY. But NOT his APPROVAL.
Here are ways to achieve more conversational reads through emphases.
Write
as you speak: with emphases. Remember,
you're preparing thoughts to relate, not writing words to read.
So speak the sentence
and listen for your emphases. You can check your choices by asking
whether the emphasis you’ve chosen implies the contrast
you intend with what came before. "What the press secretary
DIDN'T say was how the bill would be rewritten." "What
the press secretary didn't say was HOW the bill would be REwritten." What
the PRESS SECRETARY didn't say... And so on.
Electronically
mark your copy for emphases. By linking prompter
to closed captioning, the industry killed off a a valuable tool
for anchors and reporters to mark their prompter copy with caps
or asterisks. We recommend putting those marks back in. First,
there are very few hearing impaired viewers using the system.
Second, the marked emphases help them understand the copy better
because they can't hear spoken emphases!
Hand mark your paper script for emphases. Review your markings
in down times on the desk or when you look down to your script
mid story.
Tap
out or gesture for emphases when you're reading. This is critical. When you think about it, the push in your
torso when
you emphasize a word is a gesture. It's just that you don't move
your hands. Research has shown that gestures usually precede
speech. For evidence of this, wag your finger as you scold an
imaginary pooch with, "Bad dog!" Notice how far your
arm and your hand had to move before you spoke the B in "Bad".
Researchers say that the movement actually leads the changes
in rhythm that characterize conversational speech.
On
prompter, read the second line from the top. All human beings
read ahead. The higher the line on the prompter screen, the more
opportunity you have to see pauses, punctuation and breathing
times ahead.
Break
gaze with the prompter frequently. Even this momentary
act makes you read ahead as you transition to the copy or back
to the prompter. Even in this short time span, speaking from
memory forces you to ditch the processor and speak with the rest
of your brain, ras in conversation. Be careful not to break the
audio track between lookdowns and looks up. It should be as though
you seamlessly speak as you glance briefly at your watch.
Finally,
duh, know what you're talking about. This means not just being familiar with the copy itself but
with the context
of the story behind it. Even on a cold read, emphases come easier
with knowledge of context. But on a read where you know more
about the story than anyone in the newsroom, you can react to
that story BEFORE you begin speaking. For details, see "Staying
Sharp Story by Story" elsewhere in Thinking Out Loud.
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